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** Some things are changed on the real graphic novel. **
 * Graphic Novel Script (I don't have a name yet!) **


 * [Pg4-5 spread] **
 * Chapter One—The Known **

Timmy is a boy who is constantly bullied by Eddie. He wishes he could help him and all of the kids who put up with Eddie like himself.
 * [Eddie is bullying other children in the school hallways.] **
 * Text Box **
 * Dialogue **

[Eddie] Where is your lunch money kid? [Timmy] I don't have any! I am serious! [Eddie] Yeah right! Make it simple for me today. You don't want a repeat of what happened yesterday and the day before that and the day before that.. [Timmy] I understand, here

Phew! I thought he'd never leave!

I wish I could help him, But, I don't have superpowers!

If I did though, I would make sure this would not be my daily routine! I would save all of the kids who have to put up with him! I would make him a better person too!

But, until that happens, I am going to try to not make anymore contact with him. He might try to take my money...again!

**The Call: Graphic Novel **


 * [Pg6-7 spread] **
 * Chapter Two- The Call **

Timmy is now at home making his science fair project.
 * [Timmy is at home making his project for the science fair tomorrow in school.] **
 * Text Box **
 * Dialogue **

[Timmy] I am going to win this year! There is no doubt about it! [Timmy's Mom] Timothy, go to bed now pumpkin! Good night! [Timmy] I am going, I am going! I can't wait for tomorrow! **Text Box** Timmy has arrived at the science fair and it is his turn to present. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: serif; font-size: 29px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">[Mrs. Jenkins] <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: serif; font-size: 29px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Let's see you project Timmy! Make us proud! <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: serif; font-size: 29px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">[Timmy] <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: serif; font-size: 29px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Sure thing! EXPLOSION! <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: serif; font-size: 29px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">[Mrs. Jenkins] We are so disappointed in you, I thought you would do better. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: serif; font-size: 29px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">**Text Box** <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: serif; font-size: 29px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Timmy then ran into the janitor's closet and wept. He clapped his hands together in anger and instantly duplicated himself! Timmy has super powers, but has no idea how to use them.


 * [Pg8-9 spread] **
 * Chapter Three—The Threshold **

Timmy is about to get beat up by Eddie but has an important question to ask him first.
 * [Timmy wants to help Eddie be a better person by making him his sidekick by having him drink his science experiment.] **
 * Text Box **
 * Dialogue **

[Eddie] Gimme the money. [Timmy] Come in here, you are going to be a better person by being my sidekick by drinking this!

[Eddie] What do have, super powers? No way! [Timmy] Just drink it! [Eddie] Fine! OMG! Look, I am invisible! [Timmy] So you'll be my sidekick and be nice to everyone? [Eddie] Sure! We will be Double Man and Invisi Guy! Eddie and Timmy are at Timmy's house thinking about how they will use their powers. [Eddie] We could become undercover spies! [Timmy] No, lets turn on the radio. [Radio] //The Blur has escaped and has been on a rampage to take over the city! Who will stop him?// [Timmy] That is it we will save the city! [Eddie] Let's go! **Text Box** Eddie and Timmy are now on their way to defeat the Blur! [Timmy] He is fast, I don't know if we can take him. [Eddie] We have to try.
 * Text Box **


 * [Pg 10-11 spread] **
 * Chapter Four- Challenges **

Timmy and Eddie have to keep their powers and identities a secret especially in school.
 * [Timmy and Eddie are at school talking about their powers.] **
 * Text Box **
 * Dialogue **

[Eddie] Dude, can we tell anyone?

[Timmy] No! No one can know! [Eddie] But now since I am not mean, Josh is going to bully us and we cant use our powers?!?!

[Timmy] No, we can't. We are just going to have to deal with bullying. [Timmy] Hey, remember The Blur? [Eddie] Duhh! [Timmy] Lets go fight him after school! [Eddie] Let's do it!

**Text Box** Timmy and Eddie are now on their way to TRY to defeat The Blur! **Dialogue** [Timmy] Let's take 'em! [Eddie] Come on! BOOM! POW! [Shield Man] Watch out, he is too fast for minors like you, I will take you home. **Text Box** At home... [Timmy] We need to get trained better before we tak on anyone else. [Eddie] You think!


 * [Pg 12-13 spread] **
 * Chapter Five- Abyss **

Shield Man and the Blur are fighting in the city square
 * [Shield Man is fighting The Blur while Timmy and Eddie are watching from near by in their super suits.] **
 * Text Box **
 * Dialogue **

[Shield Man] You will never take over this city or defeat me!

[The Blur] Oh yes I will! (pours potion)

[Shield Man] (gasps for breath: dead)

[The Blur] Now you are all my slaves! Re build the statue of liberty so it is a statue of ME! [Timmy/ DOuble Man]

Shield Man might be gone, but Double Man and Invisi Guy are still here! [The Blur] Okay then, lets fight!

[Timmy/ Double Man] Uh, why do we have to be on top of a very tall building? How about we go down there?

[The Blur] Afraid of heights little boy?

[Timmy/ Double Man] (gulp) No.

[The Blur] Oh really? (push) I've got your friend tied up and you hanging on the edge! It is over! Mwahahaha! Bye bye!


 * [Pg 14-15 spread] **


 * Chapter Six- The Decision [Timmy is hanging off the side of a building] **
 * Text Box The Blur is evil, smart and clever, but will he defeat Double Man? **

[Timmy/ Double Man]
 * Dialogue **

You won't get away with this!

[The Blur]

I think I already have!

[Timmy/ Double Man]

Double!

[another Timmy/ Double Man appears] [The Blur] Hey, maybe we can talk this out. [Timmy/ Double Man]

I think not! Push him!

[The Blur] Nooo!!!! [Timmy/ Double Man] The city needs to stay safe. This is my home.


 * [Pg 16-17 spread] **


 * Chapter Seven- The Resolution **
 * [A newspaper talking about double man's accomplishments.] **
 * Text Box **
 * Double Man has helped so many people. The press can't get enough of him!] **


 * Dialogue **

[In Newspaper]

Double Man is a magician! Shield Man NEVER defeated as many villains as Double Man in his whole lifetime! Today he defeated Laser Man in as little as five minutes. This man will never stop, until all evil is destroyed from the world. And that will never happen! Double Man is our hero!

[Timmy/ Double Man] We are doing good to the city. [Eddie/ Invisi Guy]

I know, look how many villains we've locked up!

[Timmy/ Double Man] We saved the city, we wont stop fighting crime. [Eddie/ Invisi Guy] No matter how hard it gets. [Timmy/ Double Man]

We are here for a reason, we need to get a job done... saving lives.

=About the Author:=
 * Lejla Redzematovic is 12 years old and goes to JHS 194. She plays tennis which is her favorite sport in the WHOLE world. Her two brothers and her dad play soccer, so the majority of her family are soccer fanatics! She has a horse in Montenegro who she loves very much! She has a younger brother who is 6 and an older brother who is 16. Both can get annoying at times, but she loves them anyway. Her mom, dad, and two brothers are very supportive of everything that she does. They all love her and she loves them very much.**