leemark1

This is for the script for the Graphic Novel. I'm going to change a couple of parts in the real graphic novel. This is just the story of it but not the actual thing.


 * [Page 4-5 spread]**


 * Chapter 1: The Known**


 * [Max is a lawyer for the king of Kaneokee. Every single citizen in town were making preparations for the king's thirty fifth year of being a King. Of course, the citizens of Kaneokee had suffered very much for the thirty five years living with the king. However, none of them dared to tell the king because they knew their consequences. Even as the king's lawyer, Max is very nervous of acting a false mistake in front of the king.]**

The king arrived to Kaneokee to celebrate his thirty fifth year as a king. He examines the preparations that the citizens had done for him, but not even a tiny hint of smile came to his face.
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[Max] Is there something wrong, sir? Is something bothering you? [King] Max, you call this a celebration? I told you what I asked for and this what you give me? This is garbage! [Max started to think after the king stormed away] Wasn't this the correct thing to do? The balloons were hanging around the buildings, the sand around the king's castle were swept away, the posters laid wide for the king to read, and even the disturbing trees were cut off! What possibly did the king want more? [Citizens of Kaneokee] I knew this would happen. This always happens! I knew that this would be a waste of our time! [Luke] It's okay Max. I know you worked really hard for this day but you know that the king's temper is hard to control. [Max] Thanks Luke, but I have to go. I need to accompany the king. I'll talk to you later.
 * Dialogue**

Max reaches the king's castle and he steps forward to apologies to the king for no such reason.
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[Max] Sir, the celebration was my fault. I am terribly mistaken for acting like a fool. The next year, I will make sure that the party will be flawless. Please forgive me. [King] At least you know it's your fault. I won't punish you. I'll punish //them//. [Max] W-what? [King] Max, as my lawyer, you made an oath to do whatever I say, correct? [Max] Err... Yes sir. [King] Now, kick all of them out. //Every// single person that participated on helping the celebration. Kick them out of Kaneokee. We do not need those filthy people in our town.
 * Dialogue**

Max feels upset that he has to kick out all the people that are innocent. He doesn't understand why the king think these people were useless, until he sees his mail.
 * Chapter 2: The Call [Pages 6-7]**
 * Thought Bubble of Max**

Max reaches home and opens the envelope when an unbeliveable pain exploded on his finger.
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Max's unexpected pain starts to subside when the envelope rises in the air by itself, and opens.
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Max, you have been very loyal. You wish to stop the king's evil orders, but you can't stop him. However, more evil is starting to come. The king plans to punish the people he hates even more. He is starting to create the peoples' worst nightmares to come true, so the people would suffer even more. Now, the pain on your finger created a ring that will unleash you the power to shape shift and the power of controlling fire. Use it carefully and end the king's evil plans!
 * Letter in Envelope**

[Max] FINALLY! Using these powers, I can stop the king! I better go practice my abilities so I can master my moves.
 * Thought Bubble**

Max reaches the woods and starts praciticing his powers. He soon realizes that he really does have the abilities to create fire and shape shift into any human body he can picture in his mind. Max continues to practice when he hears a sharp shriek from behind.
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[Max] What was that? Is somebody in trouble? Sounded like it...
 * Chapter 3: The Threshold [Pages 8-9]**

Max ran to the direction of the scream, and when he reached there...
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[Max] GASP. Why is this woman on the floor like this? Did something scare her? Is she dead? I better call 911!

[Woman lying on the floor] I'm fine... You don't need to call the police.

[Max] Are you sure? I almost thought you were dead! What happened?

[Woman lying on the floor] I didn't die but instead, I was very petrified of something terrible. There was a man where I couldn't see his face. He comes up to me and spreads out his hands and an enormous spider pops out of it! The reason I was scared was because a spider is the one thing that I am scared of! It's my nightmare!

With that, the woman ran away and left Max in the woods thinking about what he had just heard.
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[Max] How can someone pop out something from their hand, knowing the exact thing that would scare a person away? Oh wait! THE ENVELOPE! It said that the king had powers to create people's nightmares into reality!
 * Thought Bubble**

Enough with this! I had enough of this King. I'm not going to deal with this king's cruelty. I'm going to end this //now.//

With that thought, Max walks to the King's castle.
 * Textbox**


 * [Pages 10-11] [Chapter 4-- The Beginning of Max's Nightmare]**

Max reaches the King's castle, and then...
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[King] You're late. [Max's Thought Bubble] What does he mean I'm late? Did he know that I was coming? Was this a plan? [Max] King of Kaneokee. I came to inform you that I am going to stop your cruelty. I wasn't able to do anything for a long time, but I can't stand it anymore. I am going to end this //now.//
 * Dialogue**

The King of Kaneokee turns around and faces Max, using an expression that Max couldn't recognise.
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[King] Are you going to use that new ring that you've received? How pathetic... [Max's thought bubble] Darn it! He knew about that? Wait a minute... The king had a black ring on his finger as well! [King] Do you think you can beat me with that useless piece of power of yours? Stop embarrassing yourself and go away before I kill you. [Max's thought bubble] Argh! The King is ignoring me as if I'm nothing. Well lets see who wins in the end!
 * Dialogue**

Max grew impatient, and he charges a fireball to attack, but the king took a Taser out of his pocket, and he shot a bolt of lightning at Max, making him fall down
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[King] This special type of Taser makes your power disappear for forty eight hours. Now, let's continue? {King] Encladues! [King] Ah, this is an experiment that I created with my scientist. I transferred some of my blood, and various of other animals' blood to form this masterpiece. More of these forms are coming, and there is nothing for you to stop it! We will rule everything!
 * Dialogue**
 * [Immediately, a young boy walks forward, and stands in front of the king.]**

Then, the boy faces Max and lays out its hand. Suddenly, the boy's hand morphed into the biggest, fattest, and the most muscular arm that Max had ever seen. The boy spreads out his hand and immediately, smoke comes out of it. Eventually, Max accidentally breathed in the gas and blacks out.
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 * [Page 12- 13 Chapter 5-- The End of Max's Horror]**

Max wakes up in the King's domain.
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[King] Ah Max, you woke up! Your powers are still gone for twenty more minutes, while I dismantle the world! [Max] I'm going to kill you... [King] mwhahahahhahahaahhahahahahahha! [Max's Thought Bubble] Woah! The king has a ring as well! That must be the source of his power! I've got an idea.... [King] Anyway, I can't stay any longer. Encladues and his clones are waiting for my signal. My guards will be watching you while I vanquish New York!
 * Dialouge**

Minutes went bu, and the clock rang. Max felt his powers reappearing. He ignited the ropes and knocked out the guards with fire. He walks out to meet the king.
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Aas Max fights Encladue's clones, he noticed something. Each time Max extinguished a clone, sparks from the inside exploded in the air.
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[Max] Each clone is made up of fire!
 * Dialouge**

[Max] I've got an idea! Since each clone is made of fire, I can blow all of them up in one shot. Okay.... Focus.... Concentrate.... Concentrate!
 * Thought Bubble**

BOOM!!

The battle field used to be filled with clones, but piles of ash took its place. Max didn't die from the explosion because fire doesn't harm him. Suddenly, Max thought of the king.
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[Max] Where did the King go?
 * Dialouge**

Max kept searching for the king, when he saw a small igre. When he examinied ir more closely, he gasped.
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[Max] The king's crown....
 * Dialogue**


 * [Page 14-15 Two page spread Chapter 6-- The New Idea.]**

The bulky explosion buried the ground, killing all of Max's enemies. Max didn't mean to kill the king.
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[Max] The King of Kaneokee is dead, and the citizens will be in chaos!
 * Thought Bubble**

The thought swirled around Max's mind when a thought popped in his head.
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[Max] Wait a minute. The citizens of Kaneokee don't know this explosion! They don't know that the King is dead!
 * Thought Bubble**

Max looked down at his ring and the thought that he was thinking of was definite.
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[Max] These powers were given to me for a reason! I'm going to use them, and make Kaneokee into a better place!
 * Thought Bubble**

Max leaves the king's crown on the floor and his ring starts to glow. Immediately, Max's whole body starts to morph, and eventually, the King of Kaneokee stood in Max's place. Max shape shifted into the king of Kaneokee
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[Max] I'm going to make Kaneokee into a better place!
 * Dialouge**


 * [Chapter 7-- Superior Pages 16- 17]**

The Shape Shifted body of the King heads to Kaneokee and examines the land
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I need to fix this...
 * Dialouge**

3 years later...
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I wonder what the citizens have done for me.
 * Max's thought bubble**

Max goes to Kaneokee and sees the citizens' preperations for his birthday.
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Max announces a speech for the citizens because he is grateful for their teamwork and dedication,
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I have led the land of Kaneokee into a huge attainment. The citizens of Kaneokee live in prosperity and peace with one another. Due to the tyrannical king's disappearance, my leadership and determination have brought us to a significant path. The citizens are no longer filled with bleak, the trash and litter that we had left on the floor are cleaned up. The houses were built with much effort, and Kaneokee returned to its superior strength! May our peace be with us!
 * Thought Bubble of Max**