KIMRACHEL

Chapter 1- The Known
 * [Pg 4-5 spread]**

[Kate's Known world is a horrible place that is full of crime] __**Text Box**__ Kate and her friends Tina and Steve lives in a town in Californina where everything is __despondent__. __**Dialogue**__ [Kate] Uhh! I hate this place! [Tina] I know right! [Kate] Everything just seems to __deteriorate__. [Steve] This place is __tarnishing__. [Tina] This is probably the worst place you can ever live in. [Steve] There are also so many criminals. [Kate] Well I am going to go home. [Steve] Bye. __**Text Box**__ Kate goes home and goes to sleep.

__**Dialogue**__ [Kate] Mom i'm home. [Mom] Hi sweety. How was your day? [Kate] Boring as usual. [Mom] That's too bad. [kate] I am going to go sleep. [Mom] Alright.

Chapter 2- The Call
 * [pg 6-7 spread]**

[Kate wakes up and discovers that she can communicate with animals.]

Kate wakes up from her sleep amd discovers that she can communicate with animals.
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__**Dialogue**__ [Sugar] Woof! [Kate] Good morning Sugar! [Sugar] Good morning Kate! [Kate] Wait, what did you just say! [Sugar] I said, Good morning Kate! [Kate] Why are you talking!!! UHH I must be dreaming! [Sugar] Your not dreaming, silly. You have the ability to talk and understand animals. [Kate] OMG!

Kate screams and her mom comes up to her room to see what's wrong.
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[Kate] AAH! [Sugar] Why are you screaming! [Kate] I am screaming cause your a talking dog! [Mom] What's wrong! [Kate] Did you know about this? [Mom] Know about what! [Kate] That I have super powers!
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Kate's mom explains everything.
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[Mom] Honey, you have the ability to talk to animals and you also have super speed. [Kate] No wonder I am always so fast! This is so cool! [Mom] If people find out, there will be a lot of commotion. Keep your powers to yourself! Promise? [Kate] Whatever.
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[**Pg 8-9]** Chapter 3- The Threshold

[Kate's mom wonders where Tina is taking her after Tina had kidnapped her]

Kate's mom gets kidnapped and she wonders where Tina is taking her.
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__**Dialogue**__ [Kate's mom] Tina where are you taking me! [Tina] I am taking you to my secret hideout! [Kate's mom] WHY! [Tina] Because, I am always tired of your daughter alway's being the most popular girl and I am stuck being the loser! [Kate's Mom] I am sure that Kate did not mean any __aggravation__ to you! [Tina] I don't care! [Kate's mom] Someone help me! Tina let me go! [Tina] Over my dead body!

Meanwhile, Kate hears her dog Sugar barking so loud that she had woken up from her sleep. Kate wonders where her mom is.
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[Sugar] WOOF! WOOF! [Kate] What's wrong Sugar? You woke me up and where's mom? She should be making breakfast! [Sugar] Your mom has been kidnapped! [Kate] By who! [Sugar] By your best friend Tina! [Kate] What! I have to go find my mom!
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Kate is now on her journey to find her mom.
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Chapter 4 - The challenge
 * [pg 10-11]**

[kate and sugar are now teaming together to go rescue Kate's mom]

Kate and Sugar goes on their journey to rescue Kate's mom
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[Kate] Sugar do you know where Tina took my mom? [Sugar] I only know that they are going to Tina's secret hideout, but I don't know where her hideout is! [Kate] Uhh what do we do?
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Sugar looks out the window and sees footprints.
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[Sugar] Hey look there are footprints outside! [Kate] Let's follow it!
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Kate and Sugar follows the footprints and finds the secret hideout.
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[Kate] Yes we found it! [Sugar] But how do we get in? [Kate] Let's try pushing on the door. [Sugar] OK! [Kate] It opened! [Sugar] That was so easy! [Kate] Tina doesn't have a smart brain.
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All of a sudden when they enter the hideout, a cage falls on Sugar and now Sugar is locked.
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[Kate] Hey let Sugar and my mom go! [Tina] I don't want to. [Kate] Why are you doing this? [Tina] I hate you! [Kate] Why! We were best friends. [Tina] We are not friends anymore! [Kate] Don't worry Sugar I will get you out and don't worry mom I will get you out too. [Sugar] How! [Kate] I guess I have to battle her!
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Chapter 5 - The Abyss
 * [pg 12-13]**

[Kate and Tina are going to go into battle]

Kate and TIna are going to start their fight. Who will win?
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[Kate] Get ready to be defeated! [Tina] Like you will ever defeat me! [Sugar] Be careful Kate! This is a very __treacherous__ act to do. [Kate] I'll be fine. [Sugar] Look out! [Kate] What!
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Kate turns around to see that Tina is pointing a gun at Kate's face.
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[Kate] What are you doing with a gun! [Tina] I am going to kill you with it. Then I will kill your dog and your mom! [Kate] Just take me. Let my dog and my mom go! [Tina] NO!
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Both the girls are now kicking and punching each other.
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[Kate] Take that! [Tina] UHH! [Sugar] Uhh... This is a __calamity__!
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Tina starts to shoot but Kate dodges all the bullets using her super speed.
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[A bubble shows saying bang] [Kate] Haha! You missed me! [Tina] What the?! How did I miss? [Kate] You will never get me!
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Meanwhile, Kate's mom pulls out her cell phone which Tina never knew she had. Kate's mom then calls 911 for help.
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[Mom] 911? [911 person] Yes. What is the problem? [Mom] I am being kidnapped and the kidnapper has a gun and she is trying to shoot my daughter. Please help! [911 person] Help will be on its way miss. [Mom] Thank you!
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The police are now coming to the destination. Will Kate be able to survive by the time the police comes?
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Chapter 6-The decision
 * [pg 14-15]**

[The police comes and takes Tina to Juvy.]

The police comes to Tina's hideout and takes Tina to Juvy for kidnapping.
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[Police] Everyone stop and stay where you are! [Tina] The police? [Kate] Take her away! She kidnapped my mom and she is trying to shoot me! [Police] You are being arrested for kidnapping little girl. [Tina] You can't do that! [Police] Yes we can! [Tina] You will __rue__ this day!
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The police and Tina now leaves and Kate opens the cages in which her dog and her mom are locked in. Kate opens the cage using a key she found under the couch.
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[Mom] Thanks for letting me and Sugar go! [Kate] You welcome. By the way, who called the police? [Mom] I did. [Kate] Great job! [Mom] Thank you. Now lets go home. [Kate] Speaking of home, I have decided to keep using my powers for good by being a veteranarian. I don't want to attract any attention to anyone so I am going to use my powers in a regular job. I will still help people out but this time I will be in a costume so no one will recognize me! [Mom] That is a very good idea! [Kate] Thank you! Come on Sugar I want to go home where everything is peaceful and relaxing. [Sugar] Thank god Tina isn't here anymore. She is such a __vindictive__ girl! [Kate] Oh yes she is!
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Chapter 7 - The Resolution
 * [pg 16-17]**

[15 years later, Kate becomes a veteranarian]

15 years later...
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[Woman] Than you for taking care of my cat! [Kate] Your welcome! Come back any time. [Woman] How do you get along with animals so much? [Kate] I don't know. I guess I have powers or something? [Woman] I __concur__. The patients leave and then Kate turns on the TV and hears that there has been a robbery.
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[TV] Breaking News! There has been a robbery! [Kate] Oh no I better go into my costume!
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Kate uses her super speed to catch the robbers. She then brings the robbers to the police.
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[Kate] Here are the robbers. [Police] Thank you! You make this town a better place. You know that ever since you have been helping the people in this town, this town has become a better place than before. You are such a __benevolent__ person. [Kate] Thank you. I will work harder to make this town great!
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__**About the Author**__ Rachel Kim is 11 years old. She is a 6th grader in her school JHS 194. She lives with her mom, dad, grandma, and her 9 year old sister in her home in Whitestone, New York. Rachel enjoys playing the piano and listening to music. Rachel also loves art and wants to become a fashion designer when she grows up. Rachel just hopes to have a succesfull carreer that involves art her favorite thing in the world!