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=Chapter 1 - The Known= [Lynn Kim lives in a city in the clouds, called Chimiri. It is never polluted, possibly the greenest place in the universe, however Chimiri lacks color of any kind. People are always willing to help each other. It is a regular city, except its location, and no one uses cars. It is a very small city.] =Textbox=

Here is Lynn Kim's world, up in the clouds. It is a Monday, and Lynn just got out of school.
=﻿Dialogue=

[Lynn]
Ugh. I'm finally out of that hell hole.

=﻿Textbox= Lynn walks home alone. It is a short walk. =﻿Dialogue= [﻿Lynn] Grandma, I'm home! I have dance class today, but I can walk there.

[Grandma]
Hello Lynn, how was your day?

[Lynn] It was so boring; I almost fell asleep in math class.

[Grandma] Hehe. I used to fall asleep in math class too. Do you want a snack to eat while you're doing homework?

[Lynn] Apple please!

=﻿Textbox= Lynn goes upstairs to do her homework.

=﻿Dialogue= [Lynn] OH GOSH! Three fifty already?!?!?!?! I'm gonna be late for dance!

=﻿Chapter 2 - The Call= =﻿Textbox= The next day...

=﻿Dialogue= [Grandma] Lynn! You have a letter addressed to you, but I don't know from who. It's on the couch

[Lynn] Alright Grandma. I'll take it upstairs. =﻿Textbox= Lynn reads the letter aloud

=﻿Thought Bubble= [Lynn] Dear Lynn Kim,

People have been disappearing in the city of Chimiri. They are being kidnapped, but the government does not know why. We believe that a certain person has done this. His name is James Carter. We are setting up a portal to New York because that's where Carter places all the missing people. We have chosen you to go because you have special powers. Use them to help you capture Carter and bring back the missing people. The government will interrogate him, and determine a punishment. The people of Chimiri are counting on you to bring back their loved ones.

Best of luck, The government.

=﻿Textbox= As Lynn is holding the letter, her whole body seems to become invisible.

=﻿Dialogue= [Grandma] I've never thought your powers would appear so quickly..

[Lynn] Since when had I ever had super powers? Grandma, did I ever have super powers?

[Grandma] Well, when the time was right, I would tell you.

[Lynn] Grandma! How come you never told me?

[Grandma] I thought you would misuse the power. You weren't mature enough to control them.

[Lynn] Do you have super powers?

[Grandma] Every decade, there is a person born with super powers. There are no pattern as to which person received the power.

[Lynn] AAH!! MY WHOLE BODY IS DISAPPEARING!

[Grandma] Lynn, you can become invisible.

=﻿Chapter 3 - The Threshold= =﻿Textbox= Lynn is going the city park. The portal will take Lynn to New York.

=﻿Dialogue= [Government official] I see the metamorphosis has taken place. You are now invisible.

[Lynn] NO REALLY?!?!? I DIDN'T NOTICE THAT.

[Government official] No need to be agitated.

[Grandma] Lynn, are you ready for this?

[Lynn] No, but I have to bring back the citizens and James Carter.

[Grandma] Be safe okay? Don't talk to strangers, and don't cross the street without looking both ways. Don't make eye contact, and don't waste your money. If it's cold-

[Lynn] I got it Grandma. Don't talk to strangers, blah blah. I'll be fine. Bye Grandma.

[Grandma] Bye- AH! LYNN! LEAVE! UNHAND ME!

[Lynn] Grandma! JAMES CARTER! I'M COMING!

=Textbox= Lynn jumps through the portal. Her journey begins.

=﻿Chapter 4 - The Challenges=

=﻿Textbox= Lynn arrives in New York in the middle of the night. It is very different. She encounters her first challenge.

=﻿Dialogue= [Thug] What the...?

[Lynn] Oh my gosh... What do I do?

[Thug] OOF! WHO JUST PUSHED ME?

[Thug] Who are you? What do you want from me?

[Lynn] You can't hurt me because there are no bullets in your gun.

[Thug] What are you?

[Lynn] Your biggest fear. RUN!

[Lynn] Well, at least that's one bad guy down. I'm closer to finding Grandma and James Carter. I'll look for him in the morning.

=﻿Textbox= The next day...

=﻿Dialogue= [Lynn] Hey... There aren't many people in New York... Who's that guy in black there? Oh my gosh, it's James Carter.

[James Carter] I was so smart to keep everyone asleep today. I have one extra person from Chimiri, and it's Lynn Kim's grandmother. This will definitely lure her into my trap.

[Lynn] Dark alleyway? Sure... It's noon so how bad can it be? AAAAAHHH!

=﻿Chapter 5 - The Abyss= =﻿Textbox= Lynn i s concious again. She wakes up in a cage next to her grandmother.

=﻿Dialogue= [Lynn] [Groan] Ugh, where am I?

[Grandma] Lynn! Oh thanks goodness you're alive. When you first came in and I called your name, you didn't stir.

[Lynn] Grandma! Oh I'm so glad I found you. Well, I have to bust outta here.

[James Carter] Well, you can't do that when I'm here! [Evil laugh]

[Lynn] Carter! Release my grandmother! Just do whatever you want to me.

[James] Sure. I'll just open your cage. Beneath you is a large hole, and if you left it, you would fall into the chasm.

[Lynn] I'm pretty sure I won't fall in the hole, jerk.

[James] I would love to see you try. It won't be that bad, your grandmother is going to join you.

[Lynn] AHH!

[James] Goodbye Grandma! Lynn, Lynn, come out where ever you are.

[Lynn] Try and find me!

[James] Ha! You are hanging on the edge of the chasm. Don't toy with me, Kim. I killed your grandmother, and you're next.

=﻿Textbox= Lynn swings her leg onto solid ground, but James Carter cannot see it.

=﻿Dialogue= [Lynn] Grandmaaaa! You killed her? Oh my gosh, you did.

[James] So tell me, who sent you here?

[Lynn] I'll never talk! Why did you kidnap all of those people?

[James] If you want a confession, fine! As a child, I was always known as the weird one. I never had any friends.

[Lynn] Give me the keys to all the cages, and I won't hurt you. You will come to Chimiri with the rest of us.

[James] I just wanted friends.

=﻿Chapter 6 - The Decision= =﻿Textbox= The government has been watching Lynn, so a portal back to Chimiri opens up for her and the others.

=﻿Dialogue= [Government official] I see you have brought back the citizens of Chimiri as well as the, um, criminal here.

[Lynn] Uh yeah. My grandmother just died.

[Government official] Well, I'm very sorry for your loss. The government was already planning in advance what we will do to Carter. He will be in jail for the rest of his life.

[Lynn] At least he can't get out and kidnap any one else.

[Government official] We are very glad that you have fulfilled your mission, and have brought back this kidnapper. Thank you.

=﻿Chapter 7 - The Resolution= =﻿Textbox= Chimiri is now in peace, and Lynn is learning how to control her powers. She is adopted now.

=﻿Dialogue= [Government official] I'm taking you to some where special where you can learn how to control your powers.

[Lynn] Who else had powers like me?

[Government official] Me. I lost my powers when you had acquired yours. I had invisibility as well. I know how to become visible and invisible.

[Lynn, wide eyed] You? Powers? What?

[Government official] So do you want to learn how to control your powers or not?

=﻿Textbox= Lynn is led outside to the park to practice using her powers.

=﻿Dialogue= [Government official] To do this, you need complete devotion and concentration.

[Lynn] Yeah yeah, whatever. Just teach me the skill.

[Government official] Alright Lynn... To become visible, you have to imagine yourself visible again. You can't think of anything else, and you can't let your mind wander the slightest bit or else only one part of you body will become visible.

[Lynn] Say wha'? Not even a little bit? Jeez... Why so uptight? ~ [Government official] I would demonstrate, but I have no powers. You try first.

[Lynn] Ok...

[Lynn, thinking] [She sees herself visible once more]

[Government official] Lynn... You did it!

[Lynn] Really? Wow! So how do I become invisible again? ~ [Government official] You imagine yourself-

[Lynn] Alright, alright I got it.. ~ [Government official] Ah Lynn. Only your head is invisible.

[Lynn] Bleh!! I got it this time.. ~ [Government official] Nice job Lynn! I think you could become a great hero.

=﻿About the Author= Madeleine Lee is eleven and goes to 194. Her favorite hobby is to dance, and she takes ballet, pointe, modern, and hip-hop classes. She has a family of six and she loves them very much. Madeleine is addicted to music, especially K-Pop. She is currently learning how to play the piano. She hopes to become a nutritionist or a professional dancer.